 Jaycie 2005-05-29 . chapter 1 for SHAME! |
 hethara 2005-03-01 . chapter 1oh god... *speechless* what happened to no premarital sex?? HAHAHAHAHA |
 nut jab 2005-02-15 . chapter 1trouser snake. heh, jay reference. awesome poem. |
 fernowee the toast 2005-02-12 . chapter 1best... song... EVER! |
 Mako3 2005-02-02 . chapter 1the narrator is 12 or something...not really he's 18-19 |
 zzxasd43and 2005-01-27 . chapter 1HA that was brutal. very entertaining.
afterthought: she's 17. how old is the narrator? |
 Sidelong 2005-01-27 . chapter 1This is a stunning commentary on today's political and emotional expectations for America's youth. The line about giving my heart morning wood almost made me pee myself. L.O.L. |