oh, so much pain.. as i read this poem i can feel it creeping in.. beautiful. what has wounded you.. is the perfect cure, yes i agree.

Oh god, this is REALLY good. The flow and emotion is AMAZING, and your style totally impressed me (which is almost unheard of, I might add). This is going on my favorite stories for SURE.

Anyway, you have alot of potential. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to seeing more =D

-Marth

Thats absolutely beautiful. Reminds me so much of what my best friend is going through. Thank you for capturing the words inside of me that are too content to escape to tell her how much I understand.

You're writing and ways of expression are awesome.