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fantasy4luvr
2008-01-26
ch 10,
abuse:(
really sad ending
FM Radio
2007-12-24
ch 3,
abuseWas she asleep during all that? Did he just take advantage of a sleeping female?! Oh the outrage! Just kidding. Lucky girl.
Suena
2007-10-08
ch 7,
abusehes a dork
Suena
2007-10-08
ch 4,
abusewell at least hse was awake
Suena
2007-10-07
ch 3,
abuseuh what a total jerk!
Suena
2007-10-07
ch 2,
abuselmao what a sucky predicament
Suena
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abusei can tell ima like this story she acts like me lol
Strangely Natural
2007-07-23
ch 10,
abuseThis line: *Do you know how much it hurts? To say the two words, ‘last time’? It was like walking away from a stranded kid, a poor orphan, who was asking you piteously for just one dollar. But actually, it hurt even more deeper than that.* is beautiful. I liked this ending because it was realistic and because maybe now that we found Kyle maybe we can find Jay too.
Keir16
2005-07-29
ch 10,
abuseOMG! i loved that story oh so very much, its amazing, but I think you should write a sequel to it, and F and Kyle get married and Jay comes to the wedding so he sees Mads and they get back together, that would be the perfect fairy tale
Lightning Storm
2005-05-25
ch 10,
abuseI loved your story. The ending was so sad and wonderful at the same time, that I almost cried, and I never cry...or at least get close to it.
Sunshine Knight
2005-05-20
ch 10,
abuseomg that was so sad but i loved this story
GothicBallerina
2005-05-15
ch 10,
abusethat is so sweet. I love kyle and feather.
Sesshy's Koi
2005-05-12
ch 10,
abuseAwe, oh my god, that was so sad!! Please don't tell met hat's the last chapter, i mean, you put 'the end' at the end of it, and well, it cant be over!! *sob* Well, if it is, I request that you write a sequel...please? That was so sad! Well, I hope to read more, and maybe even an update of Inappropriate Desires? Well, I'm glad I got to read some more, I've missed your sparradic updates, lol. Well, I hope to read more soon...buh bye!
vermillion-dream
2005-04-20
ch 10,
abusev-v You were doing so well I thought, But if you need some help... *deep breathe* HAVE NO FEAR VERMILLION IS HERE! *sigh* Okay... Yeah Hopeless romantic huh hmm I think I could help you out there and all just give meh whats on your mind and I might be able to spoof it up for ya... with love and thoughts and the togetherness... ^_^ I always leave you long uh... what are these things called... *looks in corner of screen* 0-0 oh yeah uh a uh... damn... *looks again* REVIEW Yes.. thats it... okay... I'm rambling.. Okay I'll e-mail you this exact thing... v-v no no... I will e-mail you so I can help you out. ^_^

~vermillion ^_^ *and her imaginary buddy* ^_^
RoseVampiress
2005-04-19
ch 10,
abuseWell, i've been keeping track of a few of your stories, Overseas mostly since you ended the other one or two i was reading. But with how fast you spun these out i was waiting for you to get into a rut, i've done it enough times. Anyway, i'll see what i can do about getting my "hot and horny" friends to give these a read to help you out.

~Rose~
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