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| fantasy4luvr 2008-01-26 ch 10,  | abuse:( really sad ending |
| FM Radio 2007-12-24 ch 3, | abuseWas she asleep during all that? Did he just take advantage of a sleeping female?! Oh the outrage! Just kidding. Lucky girl. |
| Suena 2007-10-08 ch 7, | abusehes a dork |
| Suena 2007-10-08 ch 4, | abusewell at least hse was awake |
| Suena 2007-10-07 ch 3, | abuseuh what a total jerk! |
| Suena 2007-10-07 ch 2, | abuselmao what a sucky predicament |
| Suena 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abusei can tell ima like this story she acts like me lol |
| Strangely Natural 2007-07-23 ch 10, | abuseThis line: *Do you know how much it hurts? To say the two words, ‘last time’? It was like walking away from a stranded kid, a poor orphan, who was asking you piteously for just one dollar. But actually, it hurt even more deeper than that.* is beautiful. I liked this ending because it was realistic and because maybe now that we found Kyle maybe we can find Jay too. |
| Keir16 2005-07-29 ch 10, | abuseOMG! i loved that story oh so very much, its amazing, but I think you should write a sequel to it, and F and Kyle get married and Jay comes to the wedding so he sees Mads and they get back together, that would be the perfect fairy tale |
| Lightning Storm 2005-05-25 ch 10, | abuseI loved your story. The ending was so sad and wonderful at the same time, that I almost cried, and I never cry...or at least get close to it. |
| Sunshine Knight 2005-05-20 ch 10, | abuseomg that was so sad but i loved this story |
| GothicBallerina 2005-05-15 ch 10, | abusethat is so sweet. I love kyle and feather. |
| Sesshy's Koi 2005-05-12 ch 10, | abuseAwe, oh my god, that was so sad!! Please don't tell met hat's the last chapter, i mean, you put 'the end' at the end of it, and well, it cant be over!! *sob* Well, if it is, I request that you write a sequel...please? That was so sad! Well, I hope to read more, and maybe even an update of Inappropriate Desires? Well, I'm glad I got to read some more, I've missed your sparradic updates, lol. Well, I hope to read more soon...buh bye! |
| vermillion-dream 2005-04-20 ch 10, | abusev-v You were doing so well I thought, But if you need some help... *deep breathe* HAVE NO FEAR VERMILLION IS HERE! *sigh* Okay... Yeah Hopeless romantic huh hmm I think I could help you out there and all just give meh whats on your mind and I might be able to spoof it up for ya... with love and thoughts and the togetherness... ^_^ I always leave you long uh... what are these things called... *looks in corner of screen* 0-0 oh yeah uh a uh... damn... *looks again* REVIEW Yes.. thats it... okay... I'm rambling.. Okay I'll e-mail you this exact thing... v-v no no... I will e-mail you so I can help you out. ^_^ ~vermillion ^_^ *and her imaginary buddy* ^_^ |
| RoseVampiress 2005-04-19 ch 10, | abuseWell, i've been keeping track of a few of your stories, Overseas mostly since you ended the other one or two i was reading. But with how fast you spun these out i was waiting for you to get into a rut, i've done it enough times. Anyway, i'll see what i can do about getting my "hot and horny" friends to give these a read to help you out. ~Rose~ |