This is one of the best stories I've read on this site :)

ohh finally something that actually goes somewhere and gets to the point in the beginning. im gonna keep reading this. wom signing out, see ya!

it was good but i'm a bit confused. do kyle and feather end up together?

:(
really sad ending

Was she asleep during all that? Did he just take advantage of a sleeping female?! Oh the outrage! Just kidding. Lucky girl.

hes a dork

well at least hse was awake

uh what a total jerk!

lmao what a sucky predicament

i can tell ima like this story she acts like me lol

This line: *Do you know how much it hurts? To say the two words, ‘last time’? It was like walking away from a stranded kid, a poor orphan, who was asking you piteously for just one dollar. But actually, it hurt even more deeper than that.* is beautiful. I liked this ending because it was realistic and because maybe now that we found Kyle maybe we can find Jay too.

OMG! i loved that story oh so very much, its amazing, but I think you should write a sequel to it, and F and Kyle get married and Jay comes to the wedding so he sees Mads and they get back together, that would be the perfect fairy tale

I loved your story. The ending was so sad and wonderful at the same time, that I almost cried, and I never cry...or at least get close to it.

omg that was so sad but i loved this story

that is so sweet. I love kyle and feather.