Greetings Scraper, I have a vague idea I know where this is from. Anyway, your story is mildly interesting but I can feel the emotion emanating from within. Very descriptive, or maybe too descriptive. I think ypu've captured the essence of Mongolian lifestyle. If I didn't know any better, I would have thought you'd visited that country. I apologize for not being able to review you all this time. Signed Kildiazar the Unwanted Ghost AKA Wingdog of the World

Very nice story here. Mongolia has a lot of potential for stories, and it's nice to see someone finally using it.

OH MY GOD completely LOVED this one. ohsorry about that Zeus story i deleted it.i think its too lame, but im making a different one thats a little tiny bit similar to that, but much better. ill post it soon. Goodluck with your oh so WONDERFUL stories!

hm not much to say you write this almost as if had lived it

Guess I just wanted to see the lovely orange sign saying "reviews"