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| For What Its Worth 2006-05-07 ch 1,  | abusethat is so deep. and so very strong. reminds me of a song by outlandish (though they're about different things. kinda. mainly strength though, that is what makes me think they are so alike). however, there are spelling errors. line one: i think you mean to say 'there'.line two of the refrain: matters. |
| HoryDory 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abusehey great song! it should be sang by someone famous. itd be a hit |
| Hidden Heart Within 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is so good. there are a few spelling errors but it is easy to connect with and i like the line of "walking in the rain". good job |
| Earthbound Angel 49 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseYEA! i absolutly love this to death! there are a few spelling erros in the begining but nothing that is terrible or disrupts the song. The illusion of walking in the rain is great! LOVE IT! TEN THOUSAND GOLD STARS! |
| Kumiko Neko 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI love your song Nick...really made me think really...I don't really know what to say to it though. It sorta has that sad ring to it and you shouldn't be sad Nick...you have plently of people around that will listen trust me Nick. I will! ^_^ |
| Steel Winged Angel 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow..so much meaning it what otherwise seems a simple song. Just a few spelling errors though. Other than that, I really enjoyed this. Nice work.~hawke |
| Dark Angel Of Heaven 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseHi little brother... you might want to accept annoymaous reviews. it's in the setup thing... anyway...I like your song... it's really sad but then in turn it gives hope... after our heated discussion I went walking in the rain. |