I'm not sure what the point of this story is, because it doesn't seem to me like a real story but like...something I would tell my friend about offhandedly. There are no details, no descriptions, so I can't call this a story even. It's more like a note you've written to yourself to not forget the plot when you're gonna write the story. It'd make a good story though.

it wasnt exactly like dreamland just followed the same topic i love the way you do these stories i think you should take one of them one day if you can and strench it and see what happens

I love all these one shots. Simple, sweet? (not sure thats the right word but meh) and yet so sorrowful. They give you enough information abou the character to allow you to build up your own version of them. It's a nice writing style!

Aezyx

This is sad. Depressing. I think you need to write a happy ending story! YEAH! I LOVE THIS STORY THO. But I hate crying. and i have a date in like 10 seconds. BUT NOW MY MASCARA IS RUNNING. Hehe, I don't like him anyway. I think I need to write right now. yeh... i'll cancel. Ur story was really ispiring. (no, i am not in an abusive relationship, but im sure it would be inspiring!) :-). Have a nice day.

Another beautiful story...although I liked Amy better. Still, sad as it is, it is very nice. *sniffs*

Wow, that's so sad. I wouldn't have put up with some boy treating ME that way. I like it though