The last line is still confusing me though i understand it now... And I love that poem. I so love it.Why are you so good at this? Why are you so good at writing? I'm jealous!! ;)

Love u,Tona

So clever, loved it. I didnt have time to read truely madly deeply, But i will! The title sounds entriging. :-) If you could RR 'everything for olivia' That would be lovely. I think It needs some work and an established poet/writer like your self could provide somehthing lovely :-)

o...I like the way thee decided to write thy poem. It's... wonderful; really - it is. When the poem first start's, thee's first reaction is suicide, but it then turns out to be... love, mayhap? ==shrugs== Very beautiful.

Amazing poem! The rhyming was great! not forced at all! I especially loved the two lines "If kisses and cuddles are designed for love only...Why does each one make me all the more lonely" such beautiful language and such sorrowful feelings in this poem...loved it! keep writing!

Hey! This is great! it flows great, i just luv the nice rhyme! but im just not quite sure what its portraying but never the less its GREAT! i luv where it says "United we stand, Divided we fall, With whom are we united?I ask through it all."

GREAT I TELL YOU! ~Ami P.S. I'm still waiting for the nxt installment of "truly madly deeply" cant wait!

Wo! Sean likes the last line. I likeded the whole thing baby! :)

wow, this is well written, it flows beautifully. It is sad though :( I enjoyed *thumbs up*

Intriguing. Very powerful use of language. Thanks very much for your very flattering review, by the way! It is much appreciated. I will try and read "truly madly deeply" when I have the time (it's quite long!). Anyway, great poem.

Woah...Dearie Lord.Why does everyone write so bloody well?? :pNo actually... Yeah you're one of the only decent ones... :pNo but this is REALLY GOOD. I love all your poetry, getting totally into it over here.

that was very good, my friend. it touched quite a few points. i absolutley loved If kisses and cuddles are designed for love only

Why does each one make me all the more lonely.

that was lovely. i have one question though, is 'am'nt' a word? lol it's fine it just kinda said 'hey look at me' very well done. and thanks for reviewing my stuff ^^

I like this one..good job

Interesting. Your bio is entirely in CAPS. Impolite...

Wow, I LOVE the last line! The is one of your best poems (at least in my opinion)! Sorry I haven't been online much lately. I have my boss to thank for that. He has given me a ton of work this week! Anyway, I miss talking to you. Thanks so much for the review, and I hope to chat with you soon! ~Abigail