Powerful I like it! Cigarette related deaths have affected me personally so its a touchy subject but this one is nicely written. Great job!

very true but i'm not going to stop. it chills me out and keeps me from killing people.

WOO! Go you! Exactly how pwople SHOULD look at it!

This poem really hits me deep cuz a lot of my family smokes and I hate it. I always think about it and it bothers me. I mean my sister smokes and I don't wanna lose her to some stupid thing like this. I love this poem. If you will allow me I want to print this poem out and put it in my binder.

Someone's a pessimist. Why cant you focus on the positive aspects? I mean, lines 1-3 I thought this might be a good poem, but it appears you were being sarcastic. Just because a person enjoys inhaling burning poisons doesn't make them a fool, you troglodyte.

I should give that one to my best friend's dad. She's been fighting with him for years over smoking. Last spring we co-wrote a poem for him, and we wrote it on the wall in her bedroom. He got a little angry, but whatever works, right?

Oh, so true. Great poem. Awesome!

Heh. Nice one here dood. Hey, and i saw Gothina. Expect loads of reviews from moi! Bye!

Cigarettes are awful. A wonderful poem illustrating that! Well done!

i agree. cigarettes are bad, and should be banned, no matter the economic oh ha. The poem is good, by the way.

Cool! Well-written. Awesome poem.

Very nice description you have there. I really like this poem.