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| CrymsonSalem 2005-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery well done. I know exactly what you mean, too. So - I guess what I'm trying to say is that since I can relate to it, then that means I also like it. Or... Something like that. |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseSo sad! So pretty! I like how you kept it in a questioning tone! Nice work. |
| audi katia 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this one a lot. I'm going to add it to my favorite storeis page. The style is great and held my attention and the thought behind it is beautiful! And all the guestions until the very last line is really kewl. I muchly approve! lol Also, I can really relate to this one. It's just how I feel about my life right now. At least until last night when I got to cry on someone's shoulder. A lot os stuff happened and I just got a chance to let it all out in the middle of a hallway in my school afet almost everyone else had left. A friend sat with me and just tried to comfort me. I have to admit that it made me feel really good. I hope that the same thing happens to you if you ever feel the need to break down and cry. A rose for you...@-->>-- |
| Amethyst-16 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully done. And very true thoughts. great job. |
| KT-Me 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseVery well done... I often wonder the same... and why does nobody ever see... well written but didn't flow as well as it could have... you are a great writer, i can see that already, use that gift to its fullest ^.^ |
| xpoisonedx 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuse^_~ that was...good! Hope you do more! Hey, thanks for the review on my poem! Well, later!~L.C |
| AllyCred 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseliked this a lot coz i can relate...well expressed...descriptions are well said, but the rhythm didn't flow as well, but nonetheless...i loved it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Tear Me Apart 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI can totally relate. Its awesome (the poem) |
| Princess Alice 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI wish I could cry but I physically can't...this is probably a lot worse though. Anyways, good poem. |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, excellent job. Your poems are about what a lot of people feel, even if they don't admit it. I loved it, you have such a great outlook on life. I hope to see more of your works soon. Unitl then, later. Masochist Maxwell |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWhy don't people ever notice that you pretend to be strong? I have the same problem. You're a really good author. You capture the meaning well. |
| TwIzTeD DeViL 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem! I find myself asking a lot of the same questions! Your work is awesome, keep it up! ^_^ |