Nicely done. I wanted to review Daughter of Whores, but unfortunately this shumuck of a computor system will not let me. But I think I can take it from this that oppressed women is something of a reoccuring theme for you. I found reading this a little strange, because looking at the way this woman of blood acts I'd say she's very similar to some of the creatures I come up with, but I hardly ever deal with women being dominated by men. May be it's because of my time in Saudi, more likely it's because it seems a little obvious that the sexes are equal, and inequality a little over done.

This is a very well written story, a good concept, the powers with blood are original and it reads easily and well. It doesn't feel as long as it is, which is a brilliant thing. But if this is the only story in you, the feisty woman struggling against her male oppressors, then sister you need some help. This is wonderfully written and you are clearly very talented. I just hope for your sake that this isn't the only story in your head, because if it is then I'd guess that you are unhappy.

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Anansi usually cheers me up. I think you will appreicate him as well.

stunning. I must admit: among the few stories ive read end to end nonstop. keep it up.

oh. I liked this one, too! now on to more! *points ahaed, in the wrong direction and goes marching off only to return, blushing, and go towards the other stories*

Very impressive. Your use of imagery and dialog is quite astute. I look foward to reading the rest.Cheers!DOTR

This is really pretty cool. I liked it. Does the main character have a name? It's not over, is it? I'm very curious; I liked it. I would reccomend starting a new paragraph every time someone different speaks, though. it makes it less confusing.

Your writing is nice, though, and fairly elegant. Nice job.