Aw :(... Boo i dont wanna be sad today. Well anyways I will get over it. Good poem ^^

absolutely beautiful, i'm very impressed by this piece, i can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Sad. But the words you use here are beautiful. Good job!

Wow, you certainly have a way with descriptions. Very beautifully written.

I really like the way this is written. Its beautiful. In some odd way, i relate.

oh, this is really nice. i love this poem. i've written some myself, but none are as descriptive as this. could you maybe read some and tell me what you think? it would mean a lot to me...

--blooming darkness

Great poem. I love the rythym and emotion. Keep them coming. Read and review some of mine if you get the chance. Thanks.McChicken

Just one question: is it supposed to rhyme? I ask this because in a few parts it did, while in the majority it didn't. Still good all the same ^-^

wow. very nice poem, sad but good. I liked the three lines: "While the snow falls around/Like stars from an endless open wound/With white blood trickling"

great imagery (or however you spell that damn word lol)

*SW*

Thank you for your reviews... you spoil me so! lol =D