|Reviews for Goodbye World|
| PuzzledThinker 4/22/05 . chapter 1
Aw :(... Boo i dont wanna be sad today. Well anyways I will get over it. Good poem
| Melissa Lea Night 3/7/05 . chapter 1
absolutely beautiful, i'm very impressed by this piece, i can't wait to read more of your stuff.
| Werewolf Nighteyes 3/3/05 . chapter 1
Sad. But the words you use here are beautiful. Good job!
| Stormie Greye 2/17/05 . chapter 1
Wow, you certainly have a way with descriptions. Very beautifully written.
| x0sweetpea160x 1/29/05 . chapter 1
I really like the way this is written. Its beautiful. In some odd way, i relate.
| Blooming Darkness 1/29/05 . chapter 1
oh, this is really nice. i love this poem. i've written some myself, but none are as descriptive as this. could you maybe read some and tell me what you think? it would mean a lot to me...
| Dr. Anonymous 1/29/05 . chapter 1
Great poem. I love the rythym and emotion. Keep them coming. Read and review some of mine if you get the chance.
| Laura Barton 1/28/05 . chapter 1
Just one question: is it supposed to rhyme? I ask this because in a few parts it did, while in the majority it didn't. Still good all the same -
| Silentwriter9 1/27/05 . chapter 1
wow. very nice poem, sad but good. I liked the three lines: "While the snow falls around/Like stars from an endless open wound/With white blood trickling"
great imagery (or however you spell that damn word lol)
Thank you for your reviews... you spoil me so! lol D