oh NO, poor Acelynn, I hope she is okay. Oh, that doctor makes me mad. Who does he think he is. UGH. What an old fart. blah. I hope Tripp will be okay also, You really make the characters come to life in here. You can feel the emotions, they just grab you. WOW, what an amazing job for just your second chapter. I can't wait to see where this story is going. You have my attention.

Very interesting start. It for sure has my attention. I can't wait to see where you are going with this story. It is intense and grabs your interest right away.

Hey Cheer. Sorry I couldn't review earlier. I'm hearting this story. That guy she met sounds sexy. Poor Ace though sounds like she's having a rough time. And I would be freaking out too if I was being shot at. I hope you update soon!

Love, Megan

hey cheery dear, i promised you i would check it out. I like it so far and i can't wait to see where you decide to go with it. I actually like this site and i may post some of my stuff on here. cool, until lata/bbysail28

Cheer girl, this is an awesome start. How come you never told me you posted over here? Anyway, Ace has a personality a lot like mine, although I never used to be the a-list kinda girl. The ending to this chap, however, wow. The poor girl sounds like she's getting hit at left right and center since her best friends death. I can only hope Mr Goatee can help her out, he sounds hot with a double T!I'll be keeping an eye out for more posts, because your original is more an indication of your writing than your fan fiction is. You've really put yourself into this!! :D

Cheer,

You know that your writing is very wonderful. I am interested to see where you take this. I know that posting this was kind of nerve racking but it is a very good story and i cant wait to see where you are going to take it. I love the way you write and the way you make things flow. keep going with this and write more soon.

Girl, I'm so glad you had the courage to post! I absolutley adore this idea and I love the name Acelynn, very unique and very very Cheerish! I think the chapter was very powerful, you had the perfect blend of emotion and drama. Your description techniques were really tuned in too and I'll eagerly wait to read a second update. Maybe if I'm a good girl I'll get a preview? *Nudge, Nudge* Love ya Princess, keep on smiling and inspiring me as you do so,

Penny x

nice work girl! I love this story! Love the name Acelynn, considering I helped pick it out lol! love this story update soon cause I can't wait to read more!

Hey chicka! Great great start! Im so happy i got to read this before hand but i still loved it all over again lol. ttyl! love ya lots

Princess