This, my friend, is what i call a moving piece. It's so drentched with emotion and feeling, it makes you want to reach out... It shows the passionate love and friendship you are willing to surrender and share... You have a beautiful gift ms. Karin (or should i call you Courtney?), to be able to share this deep feeling with the rest of us through only words... Well anyways my dearest old friend, I just want you to know that "Although words may hurt at times, they can also work wonders!" Keep on writing because you never know whose world you may be changing, or saving!XoXoXo, Sharon!

Nicely done! The rhyme made the piece flow smoothly from beginning to end. keep Writing! =D

hm...i'm slightly confused, but it is sweet. do read some of my poetry, like my personal favorite... 'Black is the Abyss'...do give me your opinion on that, and maybe on my story locked? so far, people have liked it. tell me what you think, please.

blooming darkness