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Reviews For: Compassionate Kiss Part 3
Squandy 2005-01-29 . chapter 1
Damnit, Lisa. This one needs an ending now. It's too good for you to just leave it like it is.You should definitely finish this one. Trust me, it's not finished. I'll help you with it if you want. Maybe, like a joint story, like I'll write the dialogue to one person and his thoughts (possibly Steven) and you write the dialogue and thoughts to Liz, seeing as you based her off of yourself. I dunno. Think about it. It'll be fun. I'll talk to you later. Keep up the grood work. I mean good. Great. Good and great. Stfu Mike...
freetofly 2005-01-28 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! Part 3 is definitely a good addition!
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