OMG! That was really good! I loved it! :0)

You have an interesting and vivid style, and I rather enjoy it alot. I've been going through your work, and you've got mad talent. Your writing is amazing.

this is different, and i am not sure if i fully understand the meanin, but i really like this poem. Great job

hope is such a wonderful and powerful thing. the last two lines were very good. nicely written. keep up the good work!

Beautifully written.

wow..i really like this one ;)

Hope can be one of the most tangible and most intangible things in this complicated world. Disappointingly, I have seen it being turned into a commodity, but true hope is priceless. I like how this piece draws a reader in through a child’s perspective, reminding us of the innocence that once tinted our own eyes. There are too many fears, troubles and pain in our world and while hope is not the whole solution, it is a starting point. I loved how this poem ended with the feel that one person can really make a difference.

Cheers – Autumn.

This would have to be one of my favorite poems I've read by you _ I don't suppose you've ever heard of Angel Sanctuary? Or better yet, Earthian? Fantastic wording, like in Up... Captivating.

wow.. i LOVE tis poem XP SERIOUSLY! rockz!

I enjoyed this poem. I felt as if I was in it and the children were my friends. Thank you for reviewing one of my poems. I will certainly add you to my favorites list.

i love this

'So now, I wipe my tears and hide my fears and spread my wings of feathered prayers.

Hope is something I must share, until the world decides to care…'

I love those lines! Great poem it's on my favorite list!

Masterful writing.

Lovely! I especially like the line, "...and spread my wings of feathered prayers."

very good.