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| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abusevery nice. wow, oh so very nice |
| gangster-dolly 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseSo you do write songs! Funny, my question must have been for you. You're a really good song writer, heh, better than me! Do you play an instrument? --gangster-dolly |
| Tabi Berkey 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI would like to know what your bluff was. It seems pretty crucial to the poem, but I guess if you want to leave it open-ended for readers' interpretation, then what you have is very well-written. It all really depends on what you want readers to get out of it. Nice Job :)Luv,Tabi |