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Reviews For: Royal Straight Flush

Cry Tears of Darkness
2005-01-29
ch 1,
abusevery nice. wow, oh so very nice
gangster-dolly
2005-01-28
ch 1,
abuseSo you do write songs! Funny, my question must have been for you. You're a really good song writer, heh, better than me! Do you play an instrument?

--gangster-dolly
Tabi Berkey
2005-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI would like to know what your bluff was. It seems pretty crucial to the poem, but I guess if you want to leave it open-ended for readers' interpretation, then what you have is very well-written. It all really depends on what you want readers to get out of it. Nice Job :)Luv,Tabi
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