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Reviews For: Not Quite a Love Story III: Faith is Detrimental
fbarlolken 2005-03-20 . chapter 3
This entire story was so real, so sad. I don't know how else to say it. Very direct view on life; there are no happy endings.

[The seasons will whirl around me, cycling, over and over again, until I can stand no more and I will join them in the earth.]

[Just before the tenth anniversary of their deaths, we had the ‘together forever’ plaque removed from the plot.]

I loved this trilogy. All accounts so impersonal, objective, and cold. It sort of hurt to read.
jesse 2005-02-16 . chapter 3
She never seems to really hold herself accountable, even for a moment, and that seems kinda cold...

but I did like thekind of atmosperic that made without excessive drama. I guess you could say it stays quiet... J
Heide DeVries 2005-01-31 . chapter 3
Josaine is so great. At least she found out the truth but in her case I guess she shouldn't have heard it.
Heide DeVries 2005-01-28 . chapter 1
Finally a sane point of view out of this story! ah-ha! Nice chapter.
The System Mother 2005-01-28 . chapter 1
For some reason, your character names appeal to me so.
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