wow... the feeling is really true.. and really there. i think that you have alot of emotion in it.. and i like it

I think these kind of dreams are worse than a nightmare when you're in a current state of depression. All is happy and sunny... and then you wake up.

Actually an interesting piece. Just one typo in the second last line that I noticed.

Beautiful poem.

Thanks for the mention. I appreciate it. Keep in touch.

*hugs*

RNL

I love the lines, My laughter rich, and deep, and perfect. It seems to cocoon me." just wraps rich imagery around the reader.

I like the poem alot. I often use the scene of dreaming and waking up to a cold cruel and dieing reality as well. Keep writing i'm sure more great works are going to come from you.

Dreams make the wakeful hour so dull. I think everyone can relate to this poem, it's real good.