Brilliant poem. I'm guessing it's about Ian Curtis

I love Ian Curtis! Tragic that he had to end it, but great poem. Keep writing :D

oh, wow. was this written for Ian Curtis? on a hunch, on a wild hunch. but you know...it's absolutely heartwrenching, and at the end, it all seems to come together. bloody wonderful.

I like the way the words sort of twist when you read them. Nice work.