You're sick (ah ha, and you really ARE sick, you poor thing) "Won’t you please turn the oven off" this reminded me of rape. Why, I don't even know. Gah.

Jenna xoxo

It's a good piece, maybe with a little elaboration it could strike even more so. I think I get how the title fits but I may just be reading to much into it there. It's not bad.-nix

I'm not sure I understand the signifigance of the title, but I do like the use of language. The meter is very good too, it flows very well and has a definate rhythm.

m... i really like this. it intrigued me enough to go read some of your other stuff. so excuse me. i shall review again.

Aw. Good write.