|Reviews for Mouse|
| AntiPleasure 1/30/05 . chapter 1
You're sick (ah ha, and you really ARE sick, you poor thing) "Won’t you please turn the oven off" this reminded me of rape. Why, I don't even know. Gah.
| twisted little secret 1/28/05 . chapter 1
It's a good piece, maybe with a little elaboration it could strike even more so. I think I get how the title fits but I may just be reading to much into it there. It's not bad.-nix
| Blargh213213 1/28/05 . chapter 1
I'm not sure I understand the signifigance of the title, but I do like the use of language. The meter is very good too, it flows very well and has a definate rhythm.
| realityescapesher 1/28/05 . chapter 1
m... i really like this. it intrigued me enough to go read some of your other stuff. so excuse me. i shall review again.
| The System Mother 1/28/05 . chapter 1
Aw. Good write.