That is heartbreaking. It's a lovely poem, you have a gift with poems...

I really liked this one especially the part about rain raping your skin.

Woah dark dark dark. I like it XD

Yes... a fingertip from your goal, before you're dragged down once more. That's part of life no? Though it's sad to realize that just trying your best and believing doesn't mean you will make it.

I really like your story Seing Through Tears. Are you going to update? soon? Not that I midn you taking your time, it will always be better =D

That's really tragic. it would make nice lyrics for a song. maybe I should start writting longer poetry too... =)

aw... i love it! i like the rhyming and just everything u said in it. it's so sad... but well written. keep writing

i like this alot

I'm not quite sure I understand this one, but it was interesting. Nice imagery.

Aww. I love the verse before last the best.

I really feel the longing here...

wow all your poetry ive read so far is really deep and touching. i even cried with a few. keep writing!

Very true. That's why a certain person is in control of a certain country right now...

this was well done. I really like it.

~tickles!~

so true, so true..

Aww... I love this one. To me, it means forgetting things in the temporary embrace of a love. I can also see the darkness in depending so much on this...

Whoa! A poem that was really close to my heart. Nice. I'll have to go and think a bit now.