 Thyrt 2005-09-03 . chapter 1that was brillianti loved itawesome job |
 diesoz 2005-03-26 . chapter 1Very nice, very nice. I'm going to have to read all your stuff. |
 AllyCred 2005-01-29 . chapter 1i have to say bloody brilliant...heres to throwing random words together...i love it...so powerful and just beautiful...the flow is amazing and rhyme is just simply superb. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
 SpiritualNomad 2005-01-28 . chapter 1good keep writing! |
 Aslan Israel 2005-01-28 . chapter 1hehe. Wonderful. Great job. |
 simpleplan13 2005-01-28 . chapter 1I like it a lot.. teh paradoxical iamges are awesome.. do you know how to make stanzas? if nto I could show you |