that was brillianti loved itawesome job

Very nice, very nice. I'm going to have to read all your stuff.

i have to say bloody brilliant...heres to throwing random words together...i love it...so powerful and just beautiful...the flow is amazing and rhyme is just simply superb. lots of love AllyCred

good keep writing!

hehe. Wonderful. Great job.

I like it a lot.. teh paradoxical iamges are awesome.. do you know how to make stanzas? if nto I could show you