This is the one question that everyone wonders. You do a great job with going that extra step. I wish I had an answer for you.

Nice. I love death poems! This is the secoond review I've given out! No, third, for a different story, that is. Yeah, well I was reading my reviews on and I saw yours, so I decided to look up your stories, and I found out you are on too! So I decided to review. I'm gonna post up an angst poems soon, and I was wondering if you could review my stories (or story) Anyways, this is one cool poem! I'd love you to write more! _ Keep it up!

Wow, that is just beautiful! You can be the next Edgar Allan Poe! It really made me thing real hard...

Wow...that made me ponder alot...I love it...wow...death sounds scary...

I'm not sure I agree with your opinion of death, but this is still a good poem!

That was really haunting and creepy... I Loved it!

Not bad, I like it.

It is hard to comprehend eternity...

...Hmm...

this is awesome! slightly cryptic, but still really good. it's what a lot of people wonder and its great that you've written about it. thanks for the reviews! all my love, parina x ps. yeah, science and maths lessons are the best for writing in! lol!

I can really relate to this one... For I am dead.

Death is always a puzzling affair, and I like how you wrote about it in this poem.

Nice It has a sence of Irony in it. Its very cool.

I thought the poem would have been more effective if it hadn't ended where it did. The beginning, up to "Can someone really stay dead forever?" was good. It set up a nice questioning theme, but the lines after that were...lacking. The theme of the poem was very intricate and I felt as if you could have expanded the poem more to fully cover the question of death.

Very good. It's like you're just pondering this outloud. Though I like this, I think it could've been worked around to where it flowed more smoothly. This way it sounds like it has a jutting sound when you say it aloud, making it irregular to read. Don't get me wrong, I still like it immensley. :)