I love poems you can 'taste'. Fantastic imagery, mysterious, sexy :)

This is good _ The descriptions are intresting. Keep it up.

Linux

yet another poem were i love the rhyming sceme! :)

i really like this. your word choice is perfect, and it flows well. nice work.

Wow! You are really an awesome poet,and I am not lying! I have read so many poems, but urs seem to relate to numerous things. THis is one of the best poem I have come across eversince I thought of fp! Awesome!

nice I really liked it gave alot of imagrythank you for reviewing my workand you keep up the great work

nice...very inventive...i love the comparison you made between chocolate...very well written...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

Love the rerferances to food. They make your poem so much more real, cause we've all tasted this stuff. Great job!

My favorite line: "The coffee tang you leave." decent poetry.

I liked this a lot. Very nice...hope to see more soon!

I love the whole food thing.. made me hungry...lol.. nice job

This is really good especially the

'So when my love returns

He’ll never suspect the salt in the sugar.'

Going to read everything you wrote now. )

"He’ll never suspect the salt in the sugar."

Love that line. Thanks for reviewing my stuff :)

-a/d/c

O... deep. I love all the taste references, especiall the line "your candied kiss".. I have a little Magnetic Poetry line on my fridge that's like that, it says "hot candy kiss".