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| Katterpiller 2005-05-14 ch 1, | em...wow...interesting...i thing i love most about your writing is your endings THEY ARE EMOTIONAL! i love emotional endings to other people i coment so much on them oh well i loved the ending lol "aren't we?" it was good and ended with EMOTION!my attempt is to review all your storied before the summer starts it will be so hard but i will try, you just see k ya i think thats what i am going to do. :)~Kath |
| hollyg20 2005-03-19 ch 1, | I read about 5 of your poems/stories and this one for some reason jumped out at me. I guess I know the feeling all too well (comes before the guy you read about in my work). So I wanted to say thanks for the compliments on mine *blushes* I think you have a lovely writing style as well and I'll be on the lookout for more :) |
| Dex 2005-02-17 ch 1, | I really liked this poem. But the real reason I walked with you is because no one deserves to be alone especially some oen as beautiful as you are. |
| myno 2005-01-31 ch 1, | i know that feeling... all too well. Good poem, i like your writing style- kind of simple, you don't go for eloquence or complicated formats, but your work rolls of the tongue with a natural feel to it and is beautiful because of that. |
| MorbidTruth 2005-01-28 ch 1, | I like it...reminds me of so many things. I'm still working on something for you, given the circumstances.. It should be up tonight, but I don't expect you to want to read it. As always though, it's wonderful and I look forward to more. |
| Erik Crowe 2005-01-28 ch 1, | Hey, you read my stuff, so I thought it would only be fair I read yours! lol This one's very literal. I know that feeling so well though...*sigh* |