Just like "I am no king," there is an interesting backdrop behind what is actually written that would make for a great story or play. I also found it intriguing that you used a female in the rage-against-the-machine model instead of a male. There's something to be said for the unacknowledged others who also cannot stand the way some things are run. I think it's clear that you favor the superior officer, the "interviewer." That's not usual either, so you get double marks on originality and switched positions.

What is this crap?

This play is much too short to develop a clear personality for Black. You dialog is stilted, unrealistic, and before you shoot off your mouth about the Marine Corps, you might want to do a little research before you start. It has potential, but you really need to revisit this and fix your errors.

Interesting... I like the attitude Ms. Black had toward things, very backwards of today's society but definitely honorable!! I don't think I've ever loved something with a rigid schedule, I'm too lazy =P. The interviewer was... well, a jackass!! But from the experience I've had with officials in the military, that's spot on! You have very strong characterization and the dialog flows nicely, great job!

chochang913

Hm, very thought-provoking. I wonder if this could actually happen...

Hm . . . lol. Very crisp dialogue, though this was far too brief as anything other than an exercise, as there was no deinite purpose and the idea of a pacifist Marine isn't enough to justify it. Why are they talking?

That is funny. I am very much a fan of your style. It's light, and creative. Get PUBLISHED, damn it!