Tim it was very good writting but no offense I wasn't really feeling it! Sorry but you could write the same about my stories... if you want!! Peace brudda!

"...his left wrist, where there was a dashed line across his vein, where he could cut along the dotted line..."..never again...But on another note, it was good. Rock on.

Wow...that's fancy! I know it's suppose to be sad and it is. By the suicide note was somewhat funny. Keep up the good work!

So true, so emotional, so pure. Good job on this one.