Right. And you say I'm crazy. Oh well good work Julie!

the emotion and "insanity" it gripping. I can really relate to this right now since i'm feeling slightly depressed and i know how the speaker must feel. Even if i wasn't feeling this way the poem conveys the emotion well enough that i would know anyway.

I love to auditory imagery at the beginning when the reader thinks that you are screaming out loud, only to find that the scream is a silent one of emotional pain.