i can't seem to login but as soon as i can i'll be subscribing. i really hope you come back and update this story.

Argh. Another unfinished story.

gah.

I'm not talking to you no more. *stares* bo...update update! and then i'll give you a PROPER review; I promise. :D :D *nudge nudge* how about it? You update, me give proper review :D:D

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wow your story kinda hit home w/ me, at least so far..id really like to read more. and ill agree w/ deli that this is refreshing and not quite like othersagain, please continue, its great so far

Wow, very nicly done. Keep up the good work.

great story...i must say I haven't read one quite like yours, which in my book makes your story great. i wanna read more.. please update soon.

This is very well written, and I like the plot so far. Although, it is pretty confusing to tell when each scene is happening. I can't tell when one moment is a flashback or not. That may just be my being slow, but it wouldn't hurt to cater to your more mentally impaired readers' needs by putting a little "Flashback" heading where needed. :P

I don't usually tend to read either shoujo-ai or shounen-ai, but this is sweet. I like your writing style too, it manages to be simple yet advanced at the same time. The story sounds interesting so far and it seems as though you still have quite a few things to develop in relation to the plot. There's certainly potential of becoming a great story here, keep up the good work!

- By the way, is 'Jian Dan Ai' referring to the song by Jay Chou? Because I happen to adore that song