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| simpleplan13 2006-03-21 ch 209,  | abusebeautiful and very sweet |
| simpleplan13 2006-02-05 ch 208, | abusevery pretty |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-01 ch 208, | abuseI love the beauty of these verses; the depth of pictorial detail never stops amazing me. I like to think that loves emotions (all twenty million of them) can each have a portrait in someone's mind. A face that we can trace with our hands to understand it better. Juliet. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-01 ch 209, | abuseI think you have to take it as it comes - you can gain so much with the simplist of actions, and then lose it all again the next day. I think life has a way of balancing itself out. Juliet. |
| simpleplan13 2006-01-09 ch 207, | abuseI like this.. the first stanza is my favorite... great job |
| thursdays and rain 2005-12-30 ch 207, | abusewow. beautiful imagery c: keep writing! |
| breezy nostrils 2005-12-29 ch 196, | abuseAw...sweet, and well described as usual. I can't imagine what images are going through your head that inspire these poems. keep on going! |
| breezy nostrils 2005-12-29 ch 205, | abusewow that's packed full of physical imagery. you really have a way with words. i can't quite put my finger on it. keep on writing! |
| Caoimhe's Sins 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's as though this person tore your soul apart, the "Refracted man's soul" makes you sound desolate and broken. Reminissing over the past, when you two collide, a flame jumps up (the perfect chemistry)I like the end, the sun is low in a cradle of sky as the moon ascends into the stars.Wow, I'm really poetic today. Anyway, I like your voice a lot, it shows throught in even the shortest of lines...Respectfully,Caoimhe's Sun |
| Toph Gonzalez 2005-12-17 ch 206, | abuseI especially like the imagery of the first haiku! captures its miragesque quality perfectly. |
| simpleplan13 2005-12-17 ch 206, | abuseinteresting.. I like it |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-12-16 ch 204, | abuseWonderous movement and emotion. |
| simpleplan13 2005-11-09 ch 205, | abusebeautiful and awesome... btw i wrote a new poem mainly for you so i hope your hapy.. sorry i havent been posting as much schools a bitch |
| simpleplan13 2005-11-03 ch 204, | abusebeautiful |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-21 ch 203, | abusevery pretty |