 simpleplan13 2006-03-21 . chapter 209beautiful and very sweet |
 simpleplan13 2006-02-05 . chapter 208very pretty |
 Faithless Juliet 2006-02-01 . chapter 208I love the beauty of these verses; the depth of pictorial detail never stops amazing me. I like to think that loves emotions (all twenty million of them) can each have a portrait in someone's mind. A face that we can trace with our hands to understand it better.
Juliet. |
 Faithless Juliet 2006-02-01 . chapter 209I think you have to take it as it comes - you can gain so much with the simplist of actions, and then lose it all again the next day. I think life has a way of balancing itself out.
Juliet. |
 simpleplan13 2006-01-09 . chapter 207I like this.. the first stanza is my favorite... great job |
 thursdays and rain 2005-12-30 . chapter 207wow. beautiful imagery c: keep writing! |
 breezy nostrils 2005-12-29 . chapter 196Aw...sweet, and well described as usual. I can't imagine what images are going through your head that inspire these poems. keep on going! |
 breezy nostrils 2005-12-29 . chapter 205wow that's packed full of physical imagery. you really have a way with words. i can't quite put my finger on it. keep on writing! |
 Caoimhe's Sins 2005-12-18 . chapter 1It's as though this person tore your soul apart, the "Refracted man's soul" makes you sound desolate and broken. Reminissing over the past, when you two collide, a flame jumps up (the perfect chemistry)I like the end, the sun is low in a cradle of sky as the moon ascends into the stars.Wow, I'm really poetic today. Anyway, I like your voice a lot, it shows throught in even the shortest of lines...Respectfully,Caoimhe's Sun |
 Toph Gonzalez 2005-12-17 . chapter 206I especially like the imagery of the first haiku! captures its miragesque quality perfectly. |
 simpleplan13 2005-12-17 . chapter 206interesting.. I like it |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-12-16 . chapter 204Wonderous movement and emotion. |
 simpleplan13 2005-11-09 . chapter 205beautiful and awesome... btw i wrote a new poem mainly for you so i hope your hapy.. sorry i havent been posting as much schools a bitch |
 simpleplan13 2005-11-03 . chapter 204beautiful |
 simpleplan13 2005-10-21 . chapter 203very pretty |