beautiful and very sweet

very pretty

I love the beauty of these verses; the depth of pictorial detail never stops amazing me. I like to think that loves emotions (all twenty million of them) can each have a portrait in someone's mind. A face that we can trace with our hands to understand it better.

Juliet.

I think you have to take it as it comes - you can gain so much with the simplist of actions, and then lose it all again the next day. I think life has a way of balancing itself out.

Juliet.

I like this.. the first stanza is my favorite... great job

wow. beautiful imagery c: keep writing!

Aw...sweet, and well described as usual. I can't imagine what images are going through your head that inspire these poems. keep on going!

wow that's packed full of physical imagery. you really have a way with words. i can't quite put my finger on it. keep on writing!

It's as though this person tore your soul apart, the "Refracted man's soul" makes you sound desolate and broken. Reminissing over the past, when you two collide, a flame jumps up (the perfect chemistry)I like the end, the sun is low in a cradle of sky as the moon ascends into the stars.Wow, I'm really poetic today. Anyway, I like your voice a lot, it shows throught in even the shortest of lines...Respectfully,Caoimhe's Sun

I especially like the imagery of the first haiku! captures its miragesque quality perfectly.

interesting.. I like it

Wonderous movement and emotion.

beautiful and awesome... btw i wrote a new poem mainly for you so i hope your hapy.. sorry i havent been posting as much schools a bitch

beautiful

very pretty