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simpleplan13
2006-03-21
ch 209,
abusebeautiful and very sweet
simpleplan13
2006-02-05
ch 208,
abusevery pretty
Faithless Juliet
2006-02-01
ch 208,
abuseI love the beauty of these verses; the depth of pictorial detail never stops amazing me. I like to think that loves emotions (all twenty million of them) can each have a portrait in someone's mind. A face that we can trace with our hands to understand it better.

Juliet.
Faithless Juliet
2006-02-01
ch 209,
abuseI think you have to take it as it comes - you can gain so much with the simplist of actions, and then lose it all again the next day. I think life has a way of balancing itself out.

Juliet.
simpleplan13
2006-01-09
ch 207,
abuseI like this.. the first stanza is my favorite... great job
thursdays and rain
2005-12-30
ch 207,
abusewow. beautiful imagery c: keep writing!
breezy nostrils
2005-12-29
ch 196,
abuseAw...sweet, and well described as usual. I can't imagine what images are going through your head that inspire these poems. keep on going!
breezy nostrils
2005-12-29
ch 205,
abusewow that's packed full of physical imagery. you really have a way with words. i can't quite put my finger on it. keep on writing!
Caoimhe's Sins
2005-12-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's as though this person tore your soul apart, the "Refracted man's soul" makes you sound desolate and broken. Reminissing over the past, when you two collide, a flame jumps up (the perfect chemistry)I like the end, the sun is low in a cradle of sky as the moon ascends into the stars.Wow, I'm really poetic today. Anyway, I like your voice a lot, it shows throught in even the shortest of lines...Respectfully,Caoimhe's Sun
Toph Gonzalez
2005-12-17
ch 206,
abuseI especially like the imagery of the first haiku! captures its miragesque quality perfectly.
simpleplan13
2005-12-17
ch 206,
abuseinteresting.. I like it
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-12-16
ch 204,
abuseWonderous movement and emotion.
simpleplan13
2005-11-09
ch 205,
abusebeautiful and awesome... btw i wrote a new poem mainly for you so i hope your hapy.. sorry i havent been posting as much schools a bitch
simpleplan13
2005-11-03
ch 204,
abusebeautiful
simpleplan13
2005-10-21
ch 203,
abusevery pretty
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