i'm a little confused w/ this poem... first i thought it was mebe something w/ another person, something sexual, and then i was confused cuz it didn't seem that way. oh well, it's great either way. i always love stuff that i can't figure out :)excellent write

wow... that ending is great... I really like it... very well written.. cool format

the last line, to me, seems to undermine the entire poem, and draw the entire list to just objects. i think there's a TON of imagery buried beneath it, at least up unter the line with the CDs in it. really i do. i don't know if you meant for it to be that way, though. lol. nice job, in any case, because i like the metaphors i've found, and the story i think the order of objects tell in my head. do me a favour and check out something i've written?

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very nicely done. imagery really shows the situation. i like it a lot