great story, I realize there must have been somthing to make you change them to Arethi,but it's still good ol' Divisions. I hsdn't seen anything much new on fanfiction.net, so i searched for you, found this site. In my opinion, here you have the makings of your own style of fiction,your own world of head voices. you are a great author, I look forward to more of your stories. have a happy apocalypse (it's comming!)