"It's a world kept inside a notebook

under her bed

inside a mind

that you cant see

anymore."

I can relate to that. Loved it.

Imaginary worlds are always the best, especially when you're the author. Dreams are even better.

very good imagarey. if i can even spell ;_; i loved this. keep it up.

oh! i didn't think the poem would be like this! this is really well done. a different POV to the blatant first person, even if you switched that on purpose. yeah like that made sense. anyways - i really liked this. fairy wings and broken things - great interior rhyme. the entire poem is really emphasized by talking about some unnamed person. really well done. do me a favour and check out something i've written?

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