You just took a novel and summarized it into a few paragraphs. That's cool.

I loke the description in this, really emotional work. Well done.

Very dramatic and intense, interesting. Creepy too. Good work.

amazingly creepy. I sort of understood it, but the emotions are more powerful. WOWZA!

WOW! That was cool...I loved it! :-) I loved how Sammie was screaming at the corpse! Ha ha, I say that Jenna got what she deserved...never turn your back on your friends...it's the best target...lol...okay...I'll admit maybe Sammie was a LITTLE crazy because she did take things too far...she should have just made Jenna's life a living hell...lol...loved the story lots...keep up the good work...

A rushed ending but still good. _ i liked it very much. Horrific and creepy. For someone to kill another for that reason. But people have. Well done on this!

* Noelle *

Very concise...since when did you change your penname? Odd...

umm, that was dramatic, wow, just from those words you can imagine what happened to lead to that point. Tres creepy. Good but creepy.

another nice piece. good job, i like this one better. cheers