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| sarah1491 2006-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseIt's cute, but it is not a masterpiece or anything, no offense to you or your aunt. I love dogs, and I really enjoyed reading it. :) Good job, but next time maybe you could be a little more descriptive or something. I know it's hard with the haiku style, but you could give it a shot. :) - Sarah |
| Kumoritora 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuselol. Very cute poem. Sounds just like my dog.XD Thanks for reading my poem! now I go to check out your other stuff! lol |
| Band Geek17 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable! I love the "you're my bestest friends, so I guess I will chew up all your furniture" one! So fun. Haikus are hard, too! |
| KateIxy17 2005-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abusetotally cool! keep it up! |