I love this story. I'm sorry that I didn't review chapters 2 through 5. I'm lazy. I admit it. But, as unbelievable as it may be, this chapter's writing and such is similar to the other ones. The only thing different is that it's too short. And yes, I'm pouting. But, regardless, this is a good story with not much recognition. Unfortunately, this is how fictionpress is. And you have another story. Wow. Well, I'll just have to look into that one next chance that I get to read.

I hope you can update this story soon. I really like it.

Faded Soulfire

This story is so refreshing and exciting. I loved it the minute I read the extended summary. Plus, I think Denver is a really pretty name. Who cares if it's the name of a city. I still really like it. You deserve a bazillion more reviews than this, so I'll do my rest to review every chapter.

Faded Soulfire

P.S. I'm adding this story to my favorites!

this sounds like a fun story so far. i hope ur not an author that updates once a year.

Aw. Too cute. I heart Landon.

Update soon. Really soon. K?

You have a really cute story... don't stop writing its really good!!

you know what i really don't understand? there are some stories out there that to my opinion aren't so good. i mean... i can't even make it through the first chapter without getting the urge to burn it or edit the hell out of it! And these people are getting 80 reviews on the fifth chapter! what the hell? Readers really must have forgotten the meaning and value of true, and rich literature. Your story is the one that deserves 80 reviews. i really don't know what's wrong with people. I’m angry about this! How can people not tell the good ones from the bad ones.

well, whatever. i hope you continue to write this awesome story despite peoples ignorance. i for one love it. Awesomeness with Landon! He’s so hot!

update soon.

love it!

I like this story..you better continue it!!:) Landon is a cutie. Update, please, and dont you dare stop writing,love,xxbrokenxx

oh boy... I'm hooked. lol I hope you add to it soon!

Awesome chapter. hehe, I liked the mouse part, Bridge and Sean are so cute. but i still love Landon the most. *Dreamy sighs* such a gentleman. :) update soon please

OOH! Landon sounds like a hunky! ^_^ i SO cannot wait for the next chappie. this story is awesomely written, and it looks like things are heating between Denver and Landon! (i think the mouse part was cute! X3)

I really like this one, it was so funny, i laughed my ** off! haha... her thongs were scattered on the road.. That was good. I like your characters, there very well developed and its only the second chapter.

Landon sound so HOT. And I love that name, its one of my favorites, and I actually have a Landon in one of my stories.. lol. (I couldn't resisted, if the name is hot, think of the guy you can create. ;)

Any who... PLEASE update this one. I think its going to be one of my favorites so yeah... update.

... Please?

Why am I reviewing my own story? Because I like it, and I want to know what other people think as well. At least read it...*sobs*