WOW, this is good. Reminds me of a couple years back, when I was going through some tough times (Rain). I can really identify with this one the most. Wonderful composition, and deep as well.

*hands over platter of cookies* Kudos! ^_^

~MyFantasyObsession

Hey, it's nice to see my philippines has writting talent. :) i like your poem, it's deep. :) keep up the good work

Hey! I thought we sent you a message but I guess not.

Anyway, we're reviewing to tell you you're AWESOME!

So...yeah. You know there's another Dexter book coming out? I can't recall the name right now but I'll tell you when I do...

NO POEM SHOULD BE MORE THAN ONE-AND-A-HALF 800x600-pixel-SCREEN LONG!

*shivers* creepy. I love it. It is everything ansty and lovely.

strong and heartfelt. i feel like this a lot. beautiful words. i can't say much else. this is just... amazing. k/w

in memory,~shadow

dark, and i like it that way. you are an amazing poet, after reading a couple of your things. nicely done. i'm going to continue reading your poetry. i added you to author alert and fav authors. brilliant work. k/w

in memory,~shadow

sweet poems. i understand them a lot and i dont usually read poetry unless it is in english class.

really interesting poem...I don't know why but i love the line Emotionally Anemic...

now now, don't cry...we all live in a masquerade, don't we?

you just satisfied my morbid desires...

what's next? bloodlust? \m/

whew...its nice...whahahaha!!

nice! your poems are really dark...

i have to read it again to feel the words..u write these words so simple yet powerful..

do me a favor...

pls don't make me cry..

oh..nothing like that..what i mean is..

just not too much..

good poem, strong descriptions and similes, keep it up!