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Reviews For: A Care in the World
WhisperBlack 2005-08-12 . chapter 1
you reviewed an anti-rhyme poem of mine a long time ago, so you should feel exceptionally complimented when i say i love this poem. the rhythm and flow, the words and romanticism of it...*sigh*:)
Stormer 2005-05-17 . chapter 1
This was a really pretty poem and it inspired lots of lovely images in my mind, of landscapes and of relationships. Nice work!
RainShadow2005 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
It's so refreshing and interesting how these short and uplifting little poems of yours pop up from time to time. You seem to be able to write across all genres; essays and poems and songs and even a few novels started. The line that struck a chord for me was "We'll always walk together though we be far apart." Short, to the point, and almost lyrical. I like it.
Once in a blue moon 2005-02-02 . chapter 1
This is surely true for any strong friendship. I think the simple, clean-cut verse really highlights what you are saying, rather than the style in which you say it. Bravo.
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