Yes I agree it is sad but like everything else it had it's time to shine and it's time to move on

Nice man. I like it!

Oh yeah. Did I tell you I updated already?

Have a good day.

This is really good! And so true. It has your unique depressing style that's so awesome. :-) Write more soon!

That is so sweet

* sniff* *sniff*

Lovely imagery!

This is really good.A lovly pessimistic view of the world :-)Very well written, I really like this poem.

~ColdFrost

yes, so much for joy of the world. well, that was a very well written poem, and i can see it from many different angles. well done!

if you have time, perhaps you could read some of my poetry? I've got two that are fairly new...'black is the abyss' and 'we, as men...'. if you could give me your opinion, that would be great. thanks so much!

--blooming darkness