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| AllyCred 2005-02-12 ch 1,  | abuselove the ending *bravo* ^_^ lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Allaesandra 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abuseooh that was a very dark little piece 'for all of your deciet, in the fires of hell, you'll burn' it reminded me of my ex. keep it up well done |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseKick **, it sounded like revenge! And we all know a little revenge goes a long way...unless you do it wrong. I loved it and I hope to see more soon, until then, later. Masochist Maxwell |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good. LOVE IT! |
| Princess Alice 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuseThis flowed perfectly, another one of yours that I just adored. Please keep writing! |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I liked the flow, but something felt a bit off. I'm not sure what it is. You had a good rhyme/rhythm, which is usually very hard to do. Nice job. |
| dustytiger 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abusewow, beautifully written, really, i loved the way it flowed, and the feelings that were captured, and the end just sums everything up, just in case the point was somehow missed in the beautiful words |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWow angry! Nice rhyming - and nice raging emotions. I'm glad you liked my one-shots. If you can check out a story of mine too - Either "Behind Kaiti Yotsu" or "Dream's Nightmare." Sorry if I'm bugging you - you don't have to if you don't want to. Write more soon. |
| alligater20 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWOW this is powerful! It's almost like a song I almost wanted to sing along to... Great job :) |