This is beautiful. I love the way you choose to word things > "you drink nostalgia from a coffee mug every single morning"...and I love the ending. This is all so beautiful. (I'm jealous; I can't do poetry)

oh. my. GOD. one of the most amazing poems I've read lately. Enough said.

Wow. I'm very much impressed now - this is fantastic! You're a genius! Allow me to add this to my favourites right away!

Love te last line.

Wow. Amazing. I loved it all. Great work. Just...fabulous.

I did notice you were on absence, give me points for that. What to say? You're fantastic. This is kind of haunting. I want to quote lots of lines from here...and I wish I had gotten to that last line before you did. kudos, all the way with this one, it's fantastic and I mean it.

I can kinda picture this as a song, but i's a good poem too!Lots of description and it works for you!I like it!