Really neat! I loved the rhythm. Yay for Samhain!

Interesting poem, the flow of it is good. I don't think I could ever write quiet like this.

Keep it up.

Thanks for reviewing.

Hey, I really like this! The imagery is so pretty, and I like the rhyming. Very refreshing to find a rhyme scheme that's not just every 2 or 4 lines. Good job!

Thanks for reviewing me. yes, it works as far as I know, although I hjave to admit I don't use it that often. -_-

Blessed be! ~Greenwitch

I really like this one. Religion, for me, is one of the hardest things to write about. Nice work.