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| lazygun 2005-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh this is so good! It portrays how I feel about dancing too. Perhaps it's something that only people who dance with a passion can understand? But I think that maybe with this one, it may come across to people who even don't find it as a passion. Good job. |
| unperfect blood 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all good poem. Second i know you like to dance, so why are you on the cheerleading squad instead of dance team? |
| poetic abortion 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Beautiful. Simpley amazing. Breath taking descriptions and all around cool poem. :P I love it. ^-^ !~* Noelle *~! |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abusebeautiful description.. ncie job |
| M. R. Smale 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseVery well done and just as meaningful as away to detatch from the world. Keep up the great work! |
| myno 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuseone suggestion: I like the last line better as "and then the music starts again, and my feet with it." Other than that, great job. You completely capture the movement and energy of dance. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abusewow i like this! its been such a long time since i read or reviewed your work! so sorry! ill try to more regularily though. nice combination of dance and writing, really shows your love for it. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abusewow this is mesmerizing! very well written!! |