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| L. L. Caleb 2005-08-09 ch 1,   | Captures emotion of the girls my highschool very well, this is a poem that's going on my Favorite Stories List. Good Work. |
| tainted x love 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Great poem! Very honest, also I can really relate to this. Good job. |
| Unsafety Pin 2005-02-12 ch 1, | Ah, very great, very great! :) |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-02-10 ch 1, | Thanks for your review!Yeah I can tell its about a guy - cute rhyming and overall just adorable. I love it. |
| suzieque2 2005-02-09 ch 1, | So, did you get the guy? This is a very mysterious poem. |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2005-02-05 ch 1, | The rhymes were sort of cheesy and cliche in places, but other than that... eh... decent poem =) |
| breezy nostrils 2005-02-03 ch 1, | The shape was interesting, but the rhyme seemed sorta forced *just what I get from it* It's interesting tho...nice job! |
| The Tenth Muse 2005-02-02 ch 1, | yea i know what you mean. thanks for reviewing my stuff! |
| GoogleCorelli 2005-02-02 ch 1, | ah i love poetry like this. they're my guilty pleasures, of a sort =) very nice! thanks for your review! love fromanna |
| ShinyK 2005-02-02 ch 1, | I REALLY liked this... So emotional... I like sap love and sadness...lol... Thanks for your eview by the way :) |
| jadey bear 2005-01-31 ch 1, | kool poem |
| Kym 2005-01-30 ch 1, | loved your work, the poem was good. |
| storyboy88 2005-01-30 ch 1, | aw i like that poem thats really nice lol well i posted the girl II if u want to read it ok bye |
| The tribes tale 2005-01-30 ch 1, | The last line makes the poem for me. |
| dustytiger 2005-01-30 ch 1, | hmm, intersting poem, i really liked it, good job |