moving poem. i really enjoyed reading it! ^_^ aweseome!

SP

beautiful descriptions and I can so relate.. great job

the first verse reminds me of Aura. 'tis very sad.~Xentarah

wow, great peice, really well written, well worded, and it has great flow, so it doesn't ryhme, no biggie free verse is easier and more popular, really good job on this, i understand the feelings completly, keep up the good work

Beautiful. Just beaitiful. Well done!!

~* Noelle *~