Good. Precise description of something that can be interpreted as many things.

I like this poem, it kind of matches the way I feel at the moment. Thank you for reviewing my work so long ago.

i like the old language uve added in, and this was very powerful and intense

great job!

Strong and powerful poem to convey a deep and emotional message. Great poem. I really liked this.

Enjoyable... You manage to convey your emotions very nicely. However, I found that the flow was at times not quite as smooth as it could be with a little tweaking of the rhythm. Mind you, I have nothing against a more syncopated or unconventional kind of beat, but whatever the style, rhythm is crucial to the overall quality of the piece. I also agree with another reviewer - the word "amiss" seems rather out of place in that sentence. Abyss, maybe? Other than those two points, this was a nice work, showing a great ability to capture emotions and put them into words. Keep writing! :o)

BTW, thanks for the review!

Beautiful poem. It's so sad... I like the way you carry your emotions across. It comes through in such a way that it's easy to get the 'feel' of this poem and feel that way too. Keep it up!

Very good poetry. I'd love to know what inspired you to write this. Thank you for the R&R as well. _

It was good, but I question the final two lines.

'Just because you never understood But then again, you never could'

Isn't that saying the same thing? I don't know really how to explain what I mean, but it sounds weird to me. When I take a few minutes to think about it, I become aware of what you are intending to say, but upon first glance it was confusing. Also, 'eyes of thine' sounds a bit strange as well. I was aware as to what thine meant before hand, but I guess I've just never heard it used in such a fashion.

'Don't relinquish me to the amiss'

Now, what I get from that (from the definitions of relinquish and amiss) is this sentence: Don't give up me to the wrong/wrongly/bad/badly. Somehow, that also doesn't seem correct. I know, I probably sound so picky right now, but this is just how I am perceiving this poem. T'is all from me.

wow, what a great peice, very powerful, keep up the good work

That's such a poetic word (thine). Anyhoo, nice poem.