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| Arsenic336 2005-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseThe first 4 lines and the last 4 lines just were like "So true..." Awesome work, my dear! |
| Aleara 2005-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseLast line's my favorite (from the summary) but I still loved the whole thing, I can really relate. You know, if good's so great, why can't evil become good? Why won't we let it? Ugh. Life sux. Anyways, yay that you're actually writing about him! |
| darkpaladin13 2005-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI ask myself some of these questions myself . . . some have answers, some don't. I really liked this, you did a great job of writing it. The emotions come across clearly and they're very sincere. This is a great poem, keep up the good writing. |
| dustytiger 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abusegood job, i really liked the balance between personal things ie pulling lovers apart and more social ie be blind to the hate that grows, very well written, great job! |