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| skeeves 2006-02-02 ch 3, | Jesus, 'Catcher in the Rye'? Will refer back to Emo Kid by Adam and Adrew and just plain say... Sucks. Oh, and uh, sorry to burst yer bubble here, but what's-his-** over there isn't punk. For god's sakes. Please refer: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Punk_rock Wikipedia does wonders for your soul, ya sexy **. Oh, dear. I miss the Clash, the good old days. Well. Must spank some. |
| xXblankXx 2005-02-08 ch 3, | UPDATE!...please?? |
| RZA 2005-02-04 ch 3, | very well writtian bu maybe add more detials and amke it longer to make it betta understood.. I lyk i for the most part and loe the lil clif-hanger @ the end well keep on wrtieng I want more JA NE/RZA\ |
| bleh 2005-01-31 ch 3, | am i one of the 2 first reviewers?? i hope so, lol. its nice to be loved... when its all in one paragraph tho it makes my head hurt. can you do about that?? if you can then yay!! if you cant then its not ur fault. have fun now!! |
| Esquirella 2005-01-31 ch 3, | I like this story a lot. The only comment I have now is that the formatting needs to be fixed. The one-continuous paragraph is a little hard to read. |
| xXblankXx 2005-01-30 ch 2, | UPDATE SON! |
| bleh 2005-01-30 ch 2, | aw, Tis' too short. update soon plz. sounds pretty good so far tho. |
| happybunny117 2005-01-30 ch 1, | um Isn't Pretty in Punk a song? |