This is interesting. Do you plan to continue? I mean, it would be nice if there was some sort of resolution where they realised she was innocent...i dunno...up to you, ultimately...

I like this..i dont know why, i just do...Im tired and not making snese, but this story flows and isnt al too jumpy and is good.

You said...I don't know whether to address the main character in this story in the 1st person or the 3rd.

I say..however you want, dont make her something she's not though, whatever you want, i know what you mean...and thank you so much for all the reviews.

Nice story.

Oh. F-Cat is this big test that determines if you graduate or not [which means if you fail you totally wasted 12 years of your life and you'll have to take it until you pass it, which is totally unfair].

Electives are classes you pick for fun. Like computers, music, art, etc.

Hope I cleared your mind?

This was really cool - Keep up the good work! -

* Noelle *

Dude, that was an awesome story! Way cool! I bet you enjoyed writing that one! _ That was really good, I liked how the girl in Diana's dream ended up being her grandmother's sister! COOL! MAJORLY! Great job, Olympia!

*is still trying to write hers, damnit*

apart from the losing, loosing near the top...

*applauds*