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Reviews For: I Am Yours Tonight

Autumnymph
2005-09-29
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully sad. You're very creative with words. I like the part where you put the questions and accusations in turns. Good job =)
Cloud Burst
2005-03-26
ch 1,
abusebeautiful. the edges of love and hate r finer honed than the edges of the keenest blade. great poem!
MoOkiie
2005-03-24
ch 1,
abusei think this is beautiful. i like it alot. ^__^
Scripture
2005-03-04
ch 1,
abuseO this is good! I like it! But, just a suggestion, maybe make the ending flow a little better cuz it's just a tad bit off from the rest of it. I understand the idea, it is very very good and I can relate to it very well! Very nice work!
Aslan Israel
2005-03-04
ch 1,
abuseSomewhat sad. Very good and interesting.
Werewolf Nighteyes
2005-02-01
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful yet painful. It hurts when you love someone so much but that person only keeps hurting you. I know the feeling. Keep on writing!
Eleanor Gibson
2005-02-01
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! Love-hate, Love-hate, you expressed it so well! This flowed wonderfully and it was quite captivating! -Rae
Keith Andrew
2005-01-31
ch 1,
abusethats excellent, the contradiction between love and hate is very interesting ive been there myself at times, thats very well portrayed. You're a very talented writer. I enjoy your work. Hmm...out of room on my favourites list, ill put this poem there though. Thanks for the reviews-Keith Andrew
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