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| Autumnymph 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully sad. You're very creative with words. I like the part where you put the questions and accusations in turns. Good job =) |
| Cloud Burst 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. the edges of love and hate r finer honed than the edges of the keenest blade. great poem! |
| MoOkiie 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abusei think this is beautiful. i like it alot. ^__^ |
| Scripture 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseO this is good! I like it! But, just a suggestion, maybe make the ending flow a little better cuz it's just a tad bit off from the rest of it. I understand the idea, it is very very good and I can relate to it very well! Very nice work! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseSomewhat sad. Very good and interesting. |
| Werewolf Nighteyes 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful yet painful. It hurts when you love someone so much but that person only keeps hurting you. I know the feeling. Keep on writing! |
| Eleanor Gibson 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! Love-hate, Love-hate, you expressed it so well! This flowed wonderfully and it was quite captivating! -Rae |
| Keith Andrew 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abusethats excellent, the contradiction between love and hate is very interesting ive been there myself at times, thats very well portrayed. You're a very talented writer. I enjoy your work. Hmm...out of room on my favourites list, ill put this poem there though. Thanks for the reviews-Keith Andrew |